Hypnotic September 7, 2011
Posted by Amity in haiku, Haiku Heights, Uncategorized.trackback
The eyes, soul’s window
Its gaze mesmerizes hearts
Hypnotic effect!
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Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Hypnotic
The eyes, soul’s window
Its gaze mesmerizes hearts
Hypnotic effect!
~*~*~*~
Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt: Hypnotic
The eyes are the window to the soul!
Wonderful reworking, with a hypnotic pull!
A good one.Yes eyes can cast a spell and can speak in silence.
You are doing only Haikus.What about other forms?
Oh, this is a nice one. Love it!
Melanie
That is very hypnotic indeed! Like your new BlogSkin.
This works with the haiku form well – the last line is really strong.
most certainly hypnotic! Lovely writing!
Very few people can look into someone else’s eyes for very long. It must be that hypnotic effect!
Hypnotic Meadow
maybe not all eyes… 🙂 like it!
Great write to that photo; those eyes really are hypnotic. 🙂