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Hypnotic September 7, 2011

Posted by Amity in haiku, Haiku Heights, Uncategorized.

The eyes, soul’s window

Its gaze mesmerizes hearts

Hypnotic effect!


Written for Haiku Heights

Prompt: Hypnotic



1. Andy Sewina - September 7, 2011

The eyes are the window to the soul!

Wonderful reworking, with a hypnotic pull!

2. KP - September 7, 2011

A good one.Yes eyes can cast a spell and can speak in silence.
You are doing only Haikus.What about other forms?

3. Cassiopeia Rises - September 8, 2011

Oh, this is a nice one. Love it!


4. saras - September 8, 2011

That is very hypnotic indeed! Like your new BlogSkin.

5. poetrydiary - September 8, 2011

This works with the haiku form well – the last line is really strong.

6. Amanda (iblogmoore) - September 8, 2011

most certainly hypnotic! Lovely writing!

7. magicalmysticalteacher - September 8, 2011

Very few people can look into someone else’s eyes for very long. It must be that hypnotic effect!

Hypnotic Meadow

8. Leo - September 11, 2011

maybe not all eyes… 🙂 like it!

9. Traci B - September 13, 2011

Great write to that photo; those eyes really are hypnotic. 🙂

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